Teachers comments on draft.

The title ALT looks like it says ALTL because of the bar code should be placed on the other side of the page. The picture needs to be re-sized and the shadow showing doesn't work and the bar code is too big and fat need to make sure the bar code is the same width as the letters and numbers, add a date and price. The font works well, nice choice.

There is too much shadow in the image and 'The Saints' either needs moving or removing off the page and all the black space doesn't work at the moment. Spelling mistakes need changing and there is too much text below the cover, but try re-sizing all the text. Add more pages and don't just list the names, name the pages, give contents page a page number.

 All the article text is on the same level us drop capitals and make text smaller and include more. Create name of article author and the page number it too big. Put the pull quote in the article mention who photographed the image.

My comments on other students blogs.

Draft Magazine Student Comments (Coursework)

Comments and responses to my blog.

The responses and comments from other media students and teachers have all been taken on board. They have all helped improve my work so far and give me confidence with my ideas and research i have put into the magazine to make it work.

Weekly target.

My target for this week is to create my band profile from my research i have found, then start drafting ideas for magazine designs and layouts complete all mock up designs on paper and designing a pretend photo shop version with pretend images and text found online, just to start playing around and showing potential ideas. Possible design and survey to help with research for my magazines tarts direct from the audience of my magazine and respond to any comments on my blog from teachers or other students also comment back on their blogs to help them with improvements. I need to start writing and finishing my article draft with inspiration from magazines like clash and ID, their article language and style. I even need to start preparing and researching for my first photo shoot for my magazine draft.