Showing posts with label notes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label notes. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 February 2014

Teachers comments on draft.

The title ALT looks like it says ALTL because of the bar code should be placed on the other side of the page. The picture needs to be re-sized and the shadow showing doesn't work and the bar code is too big and fat need to make sure the bar code is the same width as the letters and numbers, add a date and price. The font works well, nice choice.

There is too much shadow in the image and 'The Saints' either needs moving or removing off the page and all the black space doesn't work at the moment. Spelling mistakes need changing and there is too much text below the cover, but try re-sizing all the text. Add more pages and don't just list the names, name the pages, give contents page a page number.

 All the article text is on the same level us drop capitals and make text smaller and include more. Create name of article author and the page number it too big. Put the pull quote in the article mention who photographed the image.

Monday, 10 February 2014

Weekly target.

This week i need to take my teacher comments and other students comments on my draft design into account and maybe start improving or redesigning my draft for my final ideas and design to be in on march the 14th. I shall start with my contents page because i wasn't impressed with my draft design for that and have already ideas of what i want to try out and play around with. I also need to help other class mates by commenting on their blogs and draft designs to find improvements for them to improve their work for their final magazine design.