Some great work here Chloe. You need to make sure that every post is excellent and that you are working towards the top end of the level 4 band (B-A*).
1.graphic designer-add more examples of Peter Saville's work. also add another designer or even better add two more. this shows that you have researched different designers and not just picked the first one found/suggested.
2.add more images for the photographers researched.
3.include examples of language register from similar magazines (to yours)
okay, thank you sir. i shall research some more graphical design to show the detail i went into choosing my designers. i will add more images on photographs to show a wider range of research in their work and find other examples of my chosen language registers from other magazines like my own.
Some great work here Chloe. You need to make sure that every post is excellent and that you are working towards the top end of the level 4 band (B-A*).
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2.add more images for the photographers researched.
3.include examples of language register from similar magazines (to yours)
okay, thank you sir. i shall research some more graphical design to show the detail i went into choosing my designers. i will add more images on photographs to show a wider range of research in their work and find other examples of my chosen language registers from other magazines like my own.
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